Monday, 23 December 2019
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Kia Ora Olivia, this is Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteYou have done an incredible job on your poem. Acrostic poems are a really neat way to express feelings and experiences with a common theme, and I love how you have included images to compliment your words.
I particularly like how you have expressed so many emotions and experiences such as eating, nervousness, launching off in a rocket, and landing safely. Your poem makes me feel like I have been on an entire journey which is a very cool thing for you to have accomplished! Well done.
If you could travel into space to any planet, where would you go? I think I’d go to Mars. I’d love to meet Martians. I wonder what they’d look like! What do you think their appearance would be?
Mā te wā
Shannon (SLJ)